Friday, 9 January 2009

Today,we have presentation for how to take some note when you read the other person's essay.
In the textA, This essay firstly write about what's the globalisation.Then the essay say why the globalisation is important.At last, the essay write the advantage and the disadvantage about the globalisation.
In the text B, the essay write when has the globlisation and explain some different form of the globlisation. In the middle of essay, they write something about internation trade, import and export, some captial market.
In the text C, the essay write about the history of the globalisation, and introduce some different ideas about the globalisation. And in the end, they tell some disadvantage of the globalisation.
In the text E, the essays title is 'NO CHEERS FOR Gllbalisation". This essay said the globalisation market is very week. Because they lack global regulation,global authority, and so on.
In our group, they said the text E is difficult to understand. This essay has a lot of new words.
We have a good time in the presentation.

1 comment:

Steve said...

"Then the essay say why the globalisation is important.At last, the essay write the advantage and the disadvantage about the globalisation.
In the text B, the essay write..."

A person can write or say something, but an essay cannot do this. You need to use the passive tense here: "It was said/written in the essay that..."

Please change this.